Thursday, October 3, 2013

Characterization Essay

Tony Kim
Ms. Hawkins
English II
30 September 2013
Handicapped Family Structure Ruined by Authoritarian Government
Kurt Vonnegut, the author of “Harrison Bergeron”, depicts an environment where each citizen has a different method of dealing with the oppressive government and shows the effects of the oppression on the family unit through his characterization of three members of the family. Hazel, the mother, is the “normal” person in story and she shows [RK1] the base line of the inhabitants of America in the year 2081. On the other hand, George, the father, is a very smart man, but his thinking is disrupted due to government regulations. Harrison Bergeron, their son, is also an intelligent man like George, except he is out of control since he breaks the rules and begins to act against the dictates of the regime. Vonnegut is trying to tell us through characterization how the totalitarian [RK2] government affects the family and how each member reacts to the government’s harsh actions.
            Vonnegut depicts [RK3] Hazel as a normal woman in the environment set by totalitarian government because she is naturally handicapped [RK4] by her short term memory. Every mother loves her son or daughter, [RK5] but Hazel shows different picture. She barely remembers that her son is taken by the government. Also, when her son is killed on television, she barely remembers anything that happens on the screen. She says, “I forgot”(Harrison Bergeron 192)[TK6] . Since Hazel is too naturally handicapped, she doesn’t have any further handicaps given by the government. The Government in the story is trying to break the strong connection between family[RK7] , and Hazel works as an example of what the government would like all of its citizens to be like. Basically, the government is making people handicapped to make the family structure weaken, so people wouldn’t care about each other greatly. This advantage takes power from the family and allows the government to have more power over the people. The government just wants its citizens to be less aware and just be diligent workers.
            George is described as being more intelligent than his wife, but he has been given a handicap device to make him stop thinking. George is a smart person, but he cannot think freely because the handicap device destroys his thoughts. George has more common sense than his wife because he does remember his son being taken by the government. He says, “That must be Harrison” while seeing the television (Harrison Bergeron 136).[TK8]  He also has doubts about the government’s rule, but he seems to agree with it at times. He thinks about how a handicap shouldn’t be mandatory for the dancers, but the device scrambles his thought. Also, he thinks about his son who didn’t fit into the structure set by the government and was taken away[RK9] , but another loud sound in the form of a 21gun salute disrupts his thoughts.[RK10]  George is intelligent and has the potential to care about his family member better than Hazel, but he can’t do that because his mind is distracted by the handicapping device. The normal family dynamics is severely broken to benefit the regime. George is rendered unable to fight in any way for his son.
Citizens in this story are handicapped so they can’t think clearly and react normally when they are treated negatively. Since they are handicapped, the government has an easy time controlling people. Vonnegut uses his characterization of Hazel, George, and Harrison as the examples of what might happen to people living under a totalitarian regime and how family dynamics are affected. The various reactions of the family members to the situation illustrate how families might become when the parents are restricted from thinking freely: the mother benefits from the regulations and supports them, the father has some reservations, and the son outright rebels. None of them is able to overcome the power of the regime or solve the problems caused by it. Vonnegut shows what might happen to each family member and how each family member reacts to government’s totalitarianism.


 [RK1]A little awkward. I suggest saying “she is the base line” or “she is an example of an average person in America…”
 [RK2]?
 [RK3]depicts or describes would be better
 [RK4]if it’s natural it isn’t a handicap
 [RK5]Hello, subject change
 [TK6]Quote spoken by Hazel while watching television.
 [RK7]That isn’t what it says the reason for the handicaps are in the story
 [TK8]Quote spoken by George

 [RK9]Sounds a little awkward
 [RK10]Use quotes for these examples instead of summarizing them
 [RK11]Not why he was put in jail. He was in jail for conpiring to overthrow the government
 [RK12]Use quotes
 [RK13]Also talk about how the government is ruthless and how today they would take precaussions and try not to kill harrison
 [RK14]Use quotes
 [TK15]I added quote in the paragraph of Hazel and George;
I think it is redundant if I put the quote again.
 [TK16]This was less edited than other paragraph and I also thought that is didn’t make sense so I kind of copy pasted the paragraph and tried to make it more structural
The below paragraph is my actual conclusion.

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